Monday, 24 August 2015

Wednesday, 12 August 2015

Sacha's poem

Over the hills and far away
Above the rainbow, she beautifully lays 
Too far to reach, 
she escapes our touch 
How is it fair? 
Her soul was loved 
But surely a fool would be made out of me 
To think she was gone
taken from thee 
For now I know
it's not the end 
Over that rainbow 
I'll see her again

By Sacha

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Wednesday, 5 August 2015

Scott's Poem

Why, Oh why can’t I?
Smell the sweet smell of freshly cut grass
Feel the tension of the first morning
With the hairs standing at attention on the back of my neck
Walking down the tunnel to the cheer of the home crowd

Can I do this?

Tuesday, 4 August 2015

Amber's writing about the space video

What if your food came to life? Twisting and turning before your eyes, like a ballerina at a concert. Imagine the chore of cooking. While your tortilla tumbles away, the avocado follows suit. “OI!” I yell “stop doing cartwheels”. Mischief meats join in the ruckus making it impossible to assemble them in a line. How did I ever get into this mess?

By Amber

Madi's writing about the space video

Spicy Space Adventures

"Holy Guacamole!!!" shouted Hernandez as he took a bite of his chili chicken tortilla , each bite igniting sparks in his mouth. He began to feel an immense heat rush over his cheeks as he swallowed a chunk of the tantilising tortilla. Pasqual had eaten earlier and had finished all of the tinned tuna so he was left with a tin of chicken that resembled cat food...and kinda smelt like it too. As the fire in his stomach began to grow he believed Pasqual set him up for pranking her last week with the curry episode. 

Hernandez's stomach started to rumble, it felt like people were dancing the samba within his intestines, he couldnt take it anymore!!!! He had to get to a toilet....QUICKLY! Hernandez tried to run but the strap holding him in his seat was stuck, he called for help but no one was around.....he forgot that he was in a spacecraft 380,000 kilometres from earth...who was going to help. He pulled and yanked and squirmed as he tried to open the belt. "SNAP" it broke and Hernandez floated out of his chair, he ran like a bull towards a red cape, he REALLY needed to get to the toilet now. As he went to open the lever to the space loo it was locked...." uno momento, I think the chilli chicken is off, best you dont eat it" called Pasqual from the toilet. Hernandez froze..... "ai yai yai! WHAT DO I DO NOW?".

- Madi Ferris 

An example of vocab building activity















What other ideas do you have for developing and building rich vocab with your learners?

Writing Notebook

Please follow the link to find out more about Lucy Calkins idea of the Writer's Notebook.