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Tuesday, 16 August 2016

Writing response to space video

Writing piece to entertain..

10, 9, 8, 7, 6, 5, 4, 3, 2, 1……. BLAST OFF! I wonder where it’s gone? Flames! Smoke everywhere. It was there a minute ago but where’s it going? Everybody watching. Looking. Smiles on their faces. I don’t know why. Space, everybody tells me, that’s where it has gone, space. What is space I wonder?
“How far away is space?” I ask.  “Could I go there?”
I look up to the sky and I can’t see the rocket ship any more. What do they do in this place called space?
Amy